Which one do you like better?
THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE
What a sad world, sometimes what a pain!
Why, look here at this thin line between love and hate
Though I hate you to the bone, I love you with my soul-I try to flee but the attempt’s a goodbye in vain
Through my torture what you gain, I know not; But never before was I stained in this state
It’s my fate I suppose to fall in love with such a bitter foe
Clueless I have been as you trapped me in your lair
Now I long to be free, I am a ranger by nature so I pray, let me go
You’re grip is still tight, please let down you’re charm and flair
Remind me not, of your warm tender eyes
Nor of you’re light sarcasm nor of you’re deep sweet humor
I crave to lose you’re passionate touch, I do not want the warmth, or fire or you’re wisdom prize
You, I fear to love, you’re a danger to my fragile heart, so go and don’t linger, please fly like a rumor
Our words stopped their flow, but I still hold to hope, Maybe you know you are still my first love.
or do you like this one
A Free Life
In the sky, among the stars I shall fly
Like rainbow colored, sunlit rain drops and
Moon-lit snow flakes, which on my tongue do die
Like sunset’s colors while autumn’s leaves land
And if you want, you can come along too
As two’s better, so with you I shall roam
The beauty of earth and endless sea’s blue
Till we visit uncle Death’s mightly home
Or till I get enough with freedom’s joy
This heaven on earth, it’s true paradise
So my dear world, do yell: “Ah, land ahoy”
And one day you shall too, see this joy rise
What greater gift compares this life we’re in
What better way to live, laugh and thus win

October 22nd, 2011 at 6:37 pm
Oooohhh….the second one!!
I love the imagery, all the colours, the pictures that it creates in my mind…..it’s beautiful!
Tha passion is there in the first, but the angst overpowers the structure.
But the second one?…… just lovely!
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Little Shop of Horrors!
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October 22nd, 2011 at 8:36 pm
Pure puppy love. Its scary to fall in love, cute to those who watch, but you must wait.
You want him to be honest, you must be honest with yourself too. These are good emotions to share, be a Friend a ranger with you.
Don’t be afraid
The second very good almost a riddle
The true line between love and hate is maturity
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