Can you tell me if my tone is too casual? I find it easier to get my point acros in my unique style. As a result, I sometimes sound too casual. Here’s nearly half of my essay (note, I am did not include other half): In All the Pretty Horses by Cormac McCarthy, the story [...]
Saturday evening (November 6th) I found a note on my door that stated my apartment was going to be fogged for roaches the following Monday the 8th and that I needed to remove everything from my cabinets, drawers, closets, everything! It was basically like moving. I had left my apartment at around 12:30 on Saturday [...]
Here’s the facts, since MLB switched to the 8 team divisional format in 1995 (note that there is a distinction between best record and home field advantage…a wild card team may have a better record, but never have home field advantage): –> Of the 44 Divisional Series, the team with the best record has only [...]
Saturday evening (November 6th) I found a note on my door that stated my apartment was going to be fogged for roaches the following Monday the 8th and that I needed to remove everything from my cabinets, drawers, closets, everything! It was basically like moving. I had left my apartment at around 12:30 on Saturday [...]
I have yet a note to send I have yet to write the end Its words flow as if a hymn Alone I sit in light so dim And so the light of moonlight sings My passion from my inner being It was as if I could not see Never sleep, & never dream And [...]
