So I was with a person for 7.5 years, 1.5 of which were supposedly married – we had a ceremony, but I later got an annulment, which technically means the marriage was null and void from the beginning. Sadly he married me for money and after the Sept. 11 market crash he filed for divorce [...]
We have had fleas for three weeks. We administered frontline, which I am not all that pleased with to be honest at the beginning of July. We have been vacuuming and cleaning like nuts just like they say. We used a spray with Nylar about three weeks back too and we put down borax. The [...]
I’m writing a novel. This is the beginning, what do you think? Is it interesting or boring? I wanted thoroughly describe the whole experience so that the reader can experience it as well. If it’s not good, insight please: My mind was set up by four grey walls, floating in blackness. There was one door—just [...]
This is the beginning of my first chapter. What do you think?: My mind was set up by four grey walls, floating in blackness. There was one door—just one—that could lead you in, but not out. It seemed as if God had assigned each of his creation the right mind, but to me, I wasn’t [...]
This is how the first chapter starts: There was a window placed on a grey wall—an undeniable sense of lackluster. The window was small, round and square. It was closed, denying sunlight, and just hung there… being an idle window, I guess. There was dirt trapped in the crevices, not that anyone would actually clean [...]
